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LOZ:Twilight Princess:Prologue by ~Stephonika-W-Kaye:iconStephonika-W-Kaye:





THE LEGEND OF ZELDA: TWILIGHT PRINCESS


[BEFORE YOU READ: This is a note in which I would just like to say that Twilight Princess was the first Zelda title to make me want to write the adventure. There are things that will be different from the video game in this adaptation. For a highlight of these items, please read the artist’s comments below.]


---- Prologue: Of Symbols and Whispers


The soothing sounds of the spring lulled the sun in the evening sky above to sink into slumber. As the mass of brightness dwindled behind the clouds, a young ranch hand and a blacksmith sat admiring the peace. A burdened red horse with a glowing white mane sat behind them. It seemed the goddesses had painted the red and purple hues with their mighty brushes in the simplest harmony. Even frogs upon their lilies moaned in agreement, their croaks echoing into the stillness.
  
This was when life in the Ordon province seemed the simplest, even though it was an already simple existence. There was no rush in heavy streets, no yelling townsfolk, no ill circumstance. The trees shadowed the lives of the people, their soft whispers an unchallengeable melody of wind and leaf. There, sitting at the spirit spring, was a moment that gave another bright moment of tranquility and deterred them from their chore, yet late as it was becoming, they assured themselves there was time for this relaxation.

But it was at that time that the blacksmith, a stout-chinned man in his middle years, spoke out to the youth that sat beside him. “Tell me, Link…. Do you ever feel a strange sadness as dusk falls? They say it’s the only time when our world intersects with theirs, the only time we can feel the lingering regrets of spirits who have left our world.” He breathed deeply, thinking it over. Then he spoke softly, “That is why loneliness always pervades the hour of twilight.”

The fair-haired youth looked to him then, a glimmering wonder glazing his crystal blue eyes. His mentor always seemed so full of life even in his older age, and his sudden weariness at the dark hour troubled him. He rarely heard him speak so.

But the blacksmith shifted his focus, “Enough of this talk, though…. Link, I have a favor to ask. I’ve talked it over with the Mayor, and, although it was my duty ... I want you to take Ordon’s gift to Hyrule Castle. A sword and a shield; to be presented to the royal family.” The blacksmith took a moment before continuing, in which the young man aside him immersed himself in a dream of discovering the world that had so long been unknown to him. “You’ve never been to Hyrule in your lifetime, I know, but, Link, it is a wondrous place. The other provinces and villages are quite delightful, full of life, full of people of various occupations and interests. I want you to experience it.”

The blacksmith flashed a suggestive smile, “And perhaps you’ll be lucky enough to meet the princess herself!”

From that proposition, Link fell into a world of fantasy. What would it be to visit other villages, to meet other people who shared in his beliefs, to ascend the honorable steps of Hyrule Castle, to meet Princess Zelda? The possibilities of such a journey sparked a new life within him, and he found himself looking to his left hand. On its back there bore a symbol of three darkened triangles. All through his life in Ordon he had wondered what this figure meant. How had such a mark branded him? He could not remember. And who were his parents? Why did they leave him to this place? He did not know. Yet he wished with all his heart for the answers to fall upon him.

In that moment, the blacksmith rose and brushed off his backside. “Well, come on then, Link, best get these bundles into town before Epona falls asleep here.”

With some reluctance, Link pulled himself up from his earthly chair and took hold of Epona’s reins. He called for her to rise and she obediently dragged herself from her own thoughtful wonderings.

On the way back to the village all Link could think about was this journey upon which he would soon embark. They crossed over the bridge that linked their homes to Hyrule and passed through the rocky cliffs that adjoined to another spring. Link heard a faint whisper. The back of his hand burned suddenly, but he gave no indication of this to Rusl the blacksmith who walked idly in front of him.

Rubbing away the soft pain, Link nonchalantly turned his head in the direction of the spring, but whatever had called out, there it remained no longer. Concluding that the noise had been the frail voice of the dying wind, Link continued onward into Ordon.
©2007-2009 ~Stephonika-W-Kaye
:iconstephonika-w-kaye:

Author's Comments

I began writing this “fan-fic” of Twilight Princess, though it is more an adaptation of the video game. There are elements in this adaptation that will not coincide with the events in the game, as this is a realistic interpretation of it. In real life there wouldn’t be heart pieces or treasure chests and the like, so in this to-be-novel-size story, there will be only those elements that would be possible in medieval/fantasy times as the LOZ series is set in. Some events will be rearranged or simply deleted, and there will be some moments that are added just because I think it goes along and helps tell the story more emotionally precise.

I am still wondering whether or not to add in FULL dungeon adventures, or set them up a little differently. You guys can have a say on that. You can post how you’re liking the story so far on these deviant pages and also suggestions for the future, or you can post these suggestions with my journal entry here: [link]

Anyway, this is a “stab” at my storytelling at a Legend of Zelda adventure, filled with mystery, action, adventure, comedy, and romance. Enjoy!

Revised Prologue: [link]
Next: [link]


Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess and its characters are property of Nintendo.

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:iconmechaganon:
I wish I could use descriptions like you use in my stories. I get bored with descriptions and decide not to write them... even though I should. Haha, I've been trying though. But you rock. The prologue is nice, so I'm betting the rest will be nice, too. =p

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Broken door no longer opens.
:iconstephonika-w-kaye:
Why thank you. I guess the descriptions come from practicing my writing for at least seven years now. So, trust me, if you work hard and keep at it, you'll do well. I have highest confidence in you.

Glad your liking my adaptation, I assure you won't be disappointed if you liked this prologue. I'm working on Ch.9 right now, so I'll get back to that.

Thanks and keep reading!

--
You have no idea which way to go, do you? - McKay
Just trying to get my bearings. - Sheppard
Translation: 'I'm lost'. - McKay [Stargate Atlantis]
:iconzenu:
Well i really likes the beggining and it really did follow the game... a little too much like the game... are u gonna make link talk at all?

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I would just like to let everyone know that i suck.
And that I'm a girl, and i like ribbons in my hair
And i want to kiss all the boys...
:iconstephonika-w-kaye:
You bet he does! And thank you!

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"The city can handle that?" - Weir
"Yes. Theoretically." - Mckay
"Like 'dinosaurs turned into birds' theoretically, or 'theory of relativity' theoretically?" - Sheppard
"What? Um, somewhere in between." - McKay
[Stargate Atlantis]
:iconwosuko-san:
Huh! Nice metaphors and simils! Your writing style is very, very descriptive and effective! I want to keep reading them!!! :) Nice job!

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"Fine art is the beauty of that single fleeting moment of explosion"
:iconstephonika-w-kaye:
Thank you for such wonderful compliments! It's always lovely to hear how much Zelda fans enjoy my adaptive style to one of the best games in the series!

And, please, do keep reading!

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Please, tell them I mean no harm. - Umbridge
Sorry, Professor, but I must not tell lies. - Harry
[Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix (film version)]
:iconwosuko-san:
*stops reading* Huh? You said something? *keeps reading*
Just kidding! I will, once I start college (at home, I have some LOT of responsabilities, ya know? :P Anyway, you're welcome! And your writting style rocks, so, keep writting!

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"Fine art is the beauty of that single fleeting moment of explosion"
:icononeknownasimp:
Finally got around to finishing to prologue and it was pretty good. ^_^ I can't wait to get to the temples though. I beat the water temple today and I'd enjoy seeing how you describe it and stuff like that. Water temple's always been my favorite, since Ocarina of Time, though the temple in this game disappointed a bit, the Claw Shot made up for it in part... Anyway enough about me playing the game, this is about your adaptation after all... All in all, I'm hooked and will hopefully stay motivated enough to read it all... I'm bad about staying motivated about things... I'm going to try though. Next time we're both on, we should talk some more.
:iconstephonika-w-kaye:
Thanks!

The only temple that I've done so far is the Forest Temple. I think you'll like how I did it. I'm nearly to the Goron Mines in this, ch.17 will have most or all of it in there, and that's the chapter I'm currently writing. So, yeah it'll be no time at all before I get there. Any rooms or enemies in particular you're wanting to see? Because, after all, this novel is not just about me and my love of Zelda, it's for every fan! I hope you'll be able to spare time for my adaptation until the last page. I won't disappoint!

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Please, tell them I mean no harm. - Umbridge
Sorry, Professor, but I must not tell lies. - Harry
[Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix (film version)]
:iconstephonika-w-kaye:
Heh, heh.. Thanks! And no prob. Take your time. You'll get to savour it that way... Lol!

--
Please, tell them I mean no harm. - Umbridge
Sorry, Professor, but I must not tell lies. - Harry
[Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix (film version)]

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