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The Nightmare


Rain. Thunder. Lightning.

With each new army of droplets, a jarring bolt lit the vast sky of night. The cold air chilled his bones. He had never been here before, on a field of muddy green, the water soaking into his shoes, drenching his clothes, clinging to his hair. The wet tendrils sucked to his face, and his blue eyes gazed into the plain.

He was not at home. He did not know which way home was. He was lost, with no clue as to how he had even come to be here.

Then a long creak sounded, one that pierced the night and sent a frigid tingle down his numbed nerves. Turning about, he saw it. A castle, large … luxurious. But on this night, the torches that framed the drawbridge bounced with malicious furor. The gate was coming down.

It all happened so fast. A loud neigh. A billowing white mane. Harsh steps on wet stone and messy ground. A woman holding a girl.

All he knew was that he had leapt out of the way.

As he brought himself back up, he watched as the noble horse carried its riders away … far away.

Another horse reared, and he quickly turned about. Without knowing how he knew, he came to realize this sight is what the other riders had feared. A pair of red eyes sunk deep into him, and he looked away from the beast. Fright consumed him, yet he was not alone. Atop the steed sat another rider, this one male. But those dark, yellow eyes clinging to their lashes gazed down at him then.

His soul beat madly; he did not know what to do, how to escape.

But in that instant, everything was washed away…. Except those eyes. Those wicked demonic eyes….

And then … everything went dark and silent.
UNREVISED

I was bored and tired of not working on my TP, so I just did up a scene from Ocarina of Time. Tell me what you think.

This is the beginning scene of Link's nightmare.


Legend of Zelda Ocarina of Time and its characters are property of Nintendo.
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Quor18 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2007
That was nice. I need to write more but...ugh. Lazy.

I blame Metrod Prime 3.
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Stephonika-W-Kaye Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2007
And I blame college.

Glad you liked it!
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ZeldaFanatic92 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2007
Great story! Can't wait to see if you do another one! =)
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Stephonika-W-Kaye Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2007
I may.... if I get lonely for TP again and have a spare moment.... Hmm, but what scene?...
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ZeldaFanatic92 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2007
Watch this:

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Watch the WHOLE thing, then comment me.
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ZeldaFanatic92 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2007
How about, when Link sees Ganondorf on the last floor in the castle?
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Stephonika-W-Kaye Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2007
The one that is right before the first fight with Ganon?
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ZeldaFanatic92 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2007
Yeah, that part!!
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Vinyatare Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2007
Link <3

I like it too :)
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Stephonika-W-Kaye Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2007
Thankees!
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ShadowGamer64 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2007
nice I like it:)
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Stephonika-W-Kaye Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2007
Thanks!
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ShadowGamer64 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2007
np:)
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